"
Cycling on roads can make you lose faith in humanity," by Joelle Renstrom, published in
The Guardian, caught my attention. I hate cycling on roads, and I think the current state of driver respect for pedestrians is atrocious. I would prefer a world with no cars, and abundant public transportation and space for pedestrian travel. However, I think the intended audience of this essay would be car drivers, because she makes a convincing appeal for mindfulness and caution when driving near cyclists. I wonder if the objective of Ms. Renstrom, cyclist advocate, would be successful? I would suspect that the road-ragers that she describes would also be unlikely readers of
The Guardian, and unlikely to move past the title. But, if the goal is to provide a lively reminder to sympathetic readers that cycling in the US sucks - her writing is a success.
Some strategies that this piece uses that I found compelling include:
- An engaging hook about a terrible story involving a large number of cyclist deaths
- Very interesting stories about her own commuting by bike
- Appeal to being reasonable, by acknowledging that sometimes cyclists are also terrible (not following road rules, etc.)
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